hmmm. I'm a little wasted at the moment, so let's see if this makes any sense.
It seems to me that the issue between Ronon's promise to keep the information close is going to be warring with John's need for the information. The tension there is an interesting one.
I am also interested to see what you're going to do with Carson's abilities, especially when/if ( trying not to make assumptions here :) ) he goes back to Atlantis- from how it could inform his understanding of healing methodologies, to what it is to heal, to what it might take out of him to do so.
That's all I can come up with at the moment, but like I said...I'm a little wasted. Which could be interesting, because that means I will be surprised by my writing in the evening tomorrow when I give it the once over before posting the next update tomorrow night. (now, with 88% more smut)
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Date: 2008-12-11 07:25 am (UTC)From:It seems to me that the issue between Ronon's promise to keep the information close is going to be warring with John's need for the information. The tension there is an interesting one.
I am also interested to see what you're going to do with Carson's abilities, especially when/if ( trying not to make assumptions here :) ) he goes back to Atlantis- from how it could inform his understanding of healing methodologies, to what it is to heal, to what it might take out of him to do so.
That's all I can come up with at the moment, but like I said...I'm a little wasted.
Which could be interesting, because that means I will be surprised by my writing in the evening tomorrow when I give it the once over before posting the next update tomorrow night. (now, with 88% more smut)